3 out of 5 stars
Not a bad little novel. It is very obviously a first novel, suffering from a clunky plot and thin characterization . Our main character, Karigan, is expelled from her school for besting a boy of the nobility in a sword contest. But for the winner of such a fight, she seems absolutely clueless when she next picks up a sword.
Kari stumbles across a dying Green Rider during her trip home. He manages to convince her to take up his task—to deliver a message to the King. Reluctantly, Kari agrees, pins on his brooch, picks up his messenger bag, and catches his horse. She is the typical reluctant questor, learning things as she goes. The brooch turns out to fill much the same role as the One Ring in The Lord of the Rings , allowing Kari to fade out of view when necessary. Like A Game of Thrones, there is a magically enhanced wall to keep the darkness at bay, but someone messes with it (in the first chapter), loosing evil on this world.
Bumbling she may be, but Kari always lands on her feet and is successful. The author seems to have believed that making her reluctant and shy will substitute for character development. Several of the numerous ghosts in the story have more personality than Kari. And yet, the captain of the Green Riders wants to recruit her and the king takes notice of her.
The plot is interesting and that's what saves the novel. I found myself pulled along despite the very basic writing and jerky pacing. It's nice to have a young woman at the centre of things, even if she does flip between having good ideas and being clueless. There are no obvious love interests, though there are a couple of possibilities. There are at least seven more books in the series and I can only hope that Britain's writing style smooths out in later volumes.







